Essay Proofread

Assignment Instructions:

Please submit your “complete” third draft here. A “complete” draft means your essay has everything that is necessary for an essay: a clear introduction, body paragraphs that prove the thesis, and a conclusion. Every word and sentence should either explicitly or implicitly work to prove your thesis. You should/could also attempt to put your paper in MLA format.

As you revise, focus on the following areas:

1. Introduction: Contextualize your argument and clearly present your stance. Ensure the reader understands your position from the beginning.
2. Argument: Focus on strengthening your analysis by using the Three Rs.
3. Language: Look for clumsy or awkward sentences. Are there places where you could streamline your phrasing? If youre using three words where two would do, simplify the language.
4. Conclusion: Does your paper tie up loose ends? Reposition your reader with a new perspective? Come to a new thought about what you just argued?
5. MLA Formatting: Attempt to put your paper in MLA format. This includes using the correct font, size, and spacing; having a proper header; using in-text citations where necessary; and including a Works Cited page. Do you best to look up MLA format and give it your best shot. We will go over MLA format together next week.

Learning Objectives:

1. Organize your essay to maintain unity and coherence, ensuring that every paragraph and sentence supports your thesis through clear development and structure.
2. Analyze and present a clear stance on your argument, ensuring that your position is consistent throughout and supported by evidence.
3. Use appropriate writing conventions, including concise phrasing, effective transitions, and proper MLA formatting, to refine your argument and presentation.
4. Revise your draft by tightening your language and argument, incorporating feedback to improve clarity and effectiveness.