TOK ESSAY

Hello,

I have attached my first draft of my Theory of Knowledge (TOK) essay. A TOK essay is an IB assessment that explores how knowledge is produced, questioned, and evaluated across different Areas of Knowledge. It requires critical thinking, balanced arguments, real-world examples, and clear links to the prescribed title, rather than purely descriptive content.

The comments and corrections included in the document were provided by my teacher. Your task is to carefully review these teacher comments, edit the essay accordingly, and refine it so that it is clear, coherent, and academically strong.

Please focus on improving the structure of the arguments, the depth of TOK analysis, clarity of expression, and the consistency of links to the prescribed title, while keeping my original ideas intact. The goal is to polish the essay and make it as strong and well-developed as possible, ensuring it fully meets TOK assessment expectations.

Thank you for your help.

Attached Files (PDF/DOCX): Mass M rubric.pdf, Morosi_Mass_TOK_essay_first_draft.pdf

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